I have decided to make amendments considering that was my first draft of a script, it was likely there would be some adjustments. I have decided to make my adjustments based on my personal preference and also from advice from the Cast. Its important that I get the cast perspective as they are the ones that will be rein-acting the script so if they are not comfortable with the language, or if they have any ideas that would contribute to the dialogue being more tensed and interesting. Constructing the script is a lot harder and complex than it appears not only does it have to be relatable to the footage, but its essential the dialogue portrays the plot of the trailer and all the key moments are clearly visible within the the dialogue. I have amended and adjusted quite a lot and i feel it actually benefits the plot and the trailer very well, some of the dialogue was irrelevant and tedious, and i have abolished some of the dialogue and scenes so I definitely need to construct a new script. I have also listened to my Cast who read the scripts. I didn't ask my friends or family because I felt they would not be interested in reading a 4 page long script that has no benefit to them. So I have asked my cast as its beneficial to them and they know exactly the plot and their characters, so there advice is the best.
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