STORYBOARD:
As my pitch went exceptionally well and beforehand when creating my story board I carefully planned and thought about the narrative and structure therefore I don't have a whole lot to alter. However, i have made a slight few changes which i will address underneath. The changes will improve the structure and plot of my trailer.
I want to introduce a black screen at the 2nd to last scene so it will create this invigorating suspense when the final scene cuts in. To leave a climax so my audience will be thrilled to watch the movie and find out what happens next. The scene will the black screen will not include any non diegetic or ambient sounds it will be completely silent. When researching existing products a lot of trailers had this black screen to invoke suspense and as thrill and suspense is essential and correlates with the genre of my trailer its a key feature to include.
In addition to this, from the feedback i have received i have decided to remove the final scene of the handcuffs and include it ion the middle. I will not include the females face so its obvious that its the main character is getting arrested so its evokes suspense. I will be put in the middle with a fast cut to show the severity of her obsession. The final scene is going to be an establishing shot in the dark with the typical '911 or 999 phone call with a voice saying '999 what is your emergency' and then it will cut into the film title and the date it will appear when the trailer is going to be released.
From researching existing products the production companies are not shown until until the disruption so i think I'm going to insert the production company after the equilibrium cutting into the disruption. It creates this suspense and i want my trailer to flow like an existing trailer would so i inserting the production company title after before the disruption its a professional structure.
These are the only changes i have made regarding the plot and story board so far when filming it i could add more intertextuality, but so far these changes are adamant and i already have my plot and structure in place.
From researching existing products the production companies are not shown until until the disruption so i think I'm going to insert the production company after the equilibrium cutting into the disruption. It creates this suspense and i want my trailer to flow like an existing trailer would so i inserting the production company title after before the disruption its a professional structure.
These are the only changes i have made regarding the plot and story board so far when filming it i could add more intertextuality, but so far these changes are adamant and i already have my plot and structure in place.
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